Thursday, May 3, 2012

1-Star Reviews and Young Adult Novels

Recently I gave a book a dismal 1-star rating. I also had someone on Goodreads call my review "rude" and express a hope that I would write a book someday so that they could write "a cruel review about it." I've also noticed that my review on Amazon has gotten several "dislikes." I still think the book deserves the rating I gave it, but the whole experience so far is making me reconsider doing reviews of books in the young adult genre.

The book I reviewed has mostly good ratings on Goodreads and on Amazon. Most of the positive reviews on Goodreads are from teens, and pretty much all of them are from girls. Teen girls are a demographic that seem to have their own set of literary tastes, and when they just can't get enough of books that I think are just awful-I have to wonder-do I have any business reviewing these books?

My answer is still yes. And here's why:


1. This particular book had grammar errors on nearly every page. I don't care what your literary taste is. This kind of sloppiness is just plain unacceptable. Reviewers need to keep indie and self-published authors on their toes and adhering to standards of quality in editing.

I support the movement of independent and self-published authors. I think there is a revolution going on in the book industry, but quality standards have to be maintained. I think there are a lot of people out there who are skeptical about downloading or picking up indie-published books and this is tremendously compounded when authors don't take the time, or pay someone else to edit their work. For this particular book, the sheer number of grammar mistakes was so off-putting that it took my rating down two whole stars.

2. Grammar aside, this book was not well written. It may be popular with teen girls. It may even sell well, but that doesn't make it good book on its own. I think this is the danger of the changes sweeping the book industry. We're entering an age when anyone can write a book and be an author and the sheer number of books written each year is increasing dramatically. There's a lot of noise out there, and somebody has to help sort through it and point to quality content.

We could just let the market sort out the winners from the losers for us, but that doesn't ensure that quality books get much attention, or that the major flaws in bad books at least get noticed. The evidence that teen girls manage to love a book full of grammar mistakes and bad writing is compelling enough to me to say that we can't do this. Bad books will sell when they have good marketing and whatever formula (love triangle + trendy paranormal creatures = $$$$$) is currently in vogue.

Moreover, I think the current trend in self-publishing emphasizes quantity over quality. The financial incentives reward writing hurried novels one after another and don't reward taking the time to produce a consistently quality product. Sometimes I think authors need a negative review here and there to remind them to slow down and make their work the best it can be.

I think this is where bloggers (as well as traditional critics) come into the picture. I'm not going to say that I always have amazing taste in literature. But I am well-read. I know a good deal about the "classics" (or the canon if you prefer) of European/American literature and literary theory. I also enjoy a good page turner. In short I read a lot of books, and the more I read, the easier it is for me to sort out the good from the bad.

Of course there are going to be differences in taste. These changes in the book industry have the potential to democratize the literary world. Instead of a handful of major publishing companies deciding what gets published, now there are going to be a lot more options for readers.

But these differences in taste don't mean I shouldn't give my absolutely honest opinion in a review. At times, my honestly will be brutal. Rejection has always been a part of the experience for most authors. There aren't six major publishing houses controlling who gets published anymore, but authors still need to have thick skins and keep working to become better writers.

While getting your first novel through the publishing process is absolutely an occasion for some self-congratulation, authors should not expect everyone to be wowed by their first try. Writing is a craft that takes lots of practice. So if authors get bad reviews, they shouldn't be totally discouraged or attack their reviewers. They should take the experience and learn how to be better writers.

I will continue to review young adult books on occasion, and I will continue to give out 1-star ratings if they are appropriate.

What do you think?

14 comments:

  1. I pretty much agree entirely, though amateurish books are only half the story.

    First, though, the obligatory irony: '...but that doesn't make it good book on it's own.' [hint: 'it's' is a contraction, not a possessive]

    Anyway....

    The pandemic of hastily written messes out there bugs me intensely. There's this horrible trend of goodenoughism in writing [or, as it's become, in glorified texting] made possible by a deplorable narcissism: wording and even spelling are largely optional, because 'u no wat i ment'; it's apparently the reader's fault for failing to look past the intrusive mistakes and bask in the glory of the novelist in spite of its product.

    That said, I could make a similar argument against amateur critics. There was a time when, whether the public agreed on all points with a given review, there was a standard being followed. Today, anyone with a keyboard and a gripe can review a given book [or any other product] as easily as clicking a star and banging in 'didnt like it', disparaging whatever object out of little more than directed bloodymindedness. And that's discounting the real problem: trolls giving books one or five stars as a practical joke; the memetic habit arguably started with reviews for the Three Wolf Shirt has expanded to rating bad books sarcastically up to an average of four and a half stars, or rating decent books down toward zilch.

    Not that I, as a novelist, mind thoughtful reviews—good or bad. It sounds as though you're putting actual thought into a given review before locking it into place. But, when I see a review for any given novel with one star, because a protagonist died near the end, I'm only reminded of a time when critics first had to go to college and learn about modes of storytelling, including tragedy.

    Between hobbyist writers and hobbyist critics, the whole system is being diluted toward insignificance.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by and putting in your two cents (and for keeping me on my toes for missing an error...it's been a long day). You make a good point about the ease with which people can rate books, movies etc...without giving it much thought.

      I think I will remain a little more optimistic than to accept that the whole system is being diluted toward insignificance. I think that there are lots of good indie authors and amateur reviewers out there. I think it comes down to readers connecting with reviewers whom they trust to be consistently thoughtful in their reviews to guide them to good content they normally wouldn't read.

      Thanks again for stopping by and putting so much thought into your response!

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    2. I would have to second Trevor Kidd's thrust (thrust!). "Diluted towards," implies a state that terminates upon "insignificance." Gremlin's argument is the old logical fallacy: if it is possible for meaning to shift, then all is meaningless. (If there is no oversight (in regards to criticism) then all criticism is suspect, and invalid). However, all criticism is always-already suspect, or at least should be. I'm uncomfortable with an appeal to "true" criticism, or "true" critics. Gremlin's gesture towards the academic tradition of teaching "tragedy," (though I'm willing to call Gremlin's actual knowledge of the tragic mode out on this one), also points towards an age old fetish in the West of deferring to specialists, locking out non-specialists as less than valid. Dear Gremlin, it is the all leveling world of the internet that makes you feel as if all hierarchy has been, well, leveled. But, sir, your assessment fails to account for, well, readership. Even internet readership is still readership. Clearly, those who know what they like, and don't, and those who can parse out a fallacious critique, and those who can't, will and will not do so, respectively, whether the medium is print or screen, and the arena a bedroom or an ivy hall. Chill man, it's all good. A great novel will never be lost to those internet pranksters, and a terrible one will...well you know how it is (Fifty Shades of Gray/Twilight).

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  2. I have not been one to review books but your article and the two post gives food for thought. I am a huge reader and will read an entire book thinking it will get better but it usually does not. If I don't like the book I just shelve it but reviews does give the chance to save myself the grief of reading an entire novel that I don't like LOL. Now you are in a bit of a quandary when you are reviewing a book that young girls read. That said I agree with you that you should still keep reviewing and giving your honest opinion.

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  3. Yeah, the YA genre seems to be rife with this kind of crap. Teenage girls aren't known for having good taste, and me personally, I don't put much stock in the ratings on Goodreads because of it. It kinda reminds me of a girls' slumber party. They all sit around and talk about which boy is the cutest, giggling and laughing and generally being stupid teenage girls. And then one girl has the balls to offer a contrary opinion, and they all descend on her like a pack of wolves.

    In my opinion, if you aren't prepared to take negative criticism with your work, don't put it out there for the world to see. And honestly--the typos and misspellings? If you're not going to hire an editor, at least give it to a bunch of friends to proofread the easy stuff, for chrissakes. Ugh.

    Dude, just keep on keeping on. Call a spade a spade and move on with life. A mature author will take the lumps and move along amicably, and most people out there will appreciate your candor.

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  4. Yes, I'm with you on that: spelling/grammatical mistakes on every page shows inconsideration for the reader; I'd give them a bad review as well.

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  5. Let's give up on the Grammar police guys... what would you English teacher have said about texting?? There is more communication between young people in 2012 than in any year previously... if your audience doesn't see the error.. how can it be inconsiderate to the reader??

    That's my 2 bobs worth... [That's an #AussieSaying}

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  6. This is a great post!! I found you on 'Goodreads'(ironic) list of nominated blogs in the Independent Book Blogger Awards. I am a fellow reviewer and we handle a TON of reviews at WebbWeaver. Our policy is pretty clear where it pertains to bad reviews... If we review a book on our blog and for whatever reason are unable to write a positive review with a 3-spider rating or higher, we will not post the review on our site. Authors know our policy and because of it, we get hundreds of review requests. This, we have found, has been a great way to provide our readers with, what we feel, is the best of the best in books from Indie, self-published and Traditionally published writers. We will always contact the author & explain why the reviewer feels the book cannot be reviewed positively. Not only does this provide positive feedback for the writer, it gives us a unique relationship with our readers... they know if we publish a review, we feel it is a good book for its' genre. Now... before you give us they old 'Reviewers should review and rate books honestly' spill, let me add something to this. The reviews we do are requested by the authors in an attempt to get more exposure for their writing. We will never slam a book on our site because, at the end of the day, we are here to help authors not hurt them. I understand an honest review of a book that you have purchased and I respect it. When I see 'Verified Purchase' on a review of one of our books, even if it isn't the most positive review, I still appreciate the review and respect the person reviewing. Our writing will not appeal to everyone and I am okay with that. Our first book has been slammed a few times for grammatical & spelling errors... not fun! Our second book, not so much... proffesional editing makes a world of difference. So, it all comes down to each person's outlook on reviewing. Are reviews meant to highlight the terrible parts of a piece OR are they meant to highlight the best parts?? I think it should probably be both. At the end of the day, what do your readers come to your site for and what do they expect in a review from you??
    Funny thing is, I have never let a review keep me from reading a book or watching a film that I want to see... reviews are simply oppinions and suggestions.

    BTW, teenage girls are an alien race of beings that NO ONE should ever try to take on ;-)

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  7. Bang on. I'm of the opinion that if you decide to put your writing into the public sphere, whether it be in the form of a book, magazine article or blog post, you are now fair game for criticism, good and bad.

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  8. You are perfectly entitled to your opinion, however that being said, you should give each book a fair chance, and it sounds like you did with this book.

    Editing is very important for self-publishers, and it is sad that more don't take that to heart.

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  9. What good are reviews if they are all good? A bad review is just as worthy as a good one. It shows you took the time to to read it. While I try to focus on the good ones, I pay attention to the bad reviews.

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  10. Wow, taking on teenage girls - you are a brave man.

    I read an indie book which was horrible (put it this way: the dedication was misspelled), when I contacted the author I got back a two page email of curses. The idiot also published it on Facebook thinking it was hilarious (his friends thought so also). That put me off Indie books for a while and now I won't even read a book if it was not professionally edited.

    http://www.ManOfLaBook.com

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  11. I rely on personal recommendations, as well as blogs like this one, to help me sort out the wheat from the chaff, because these days, there is a hell of a lot of chaff. Keep on keepin' on.

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  12. I thought this was an interesting post. I think it is important to give a book a fair chance and it sounds like you did. It can be hard to get enjoy a book when there are a ton of mistakes. I don't know what book you are speaking of, but I am sorry to hear that you are having a bad experience.
    ~Jess

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